Beginner's luck?

Bringing it all together within the covers of a virtual book created a view of the whole. The spreads brought extra dynamism to many pictures, contrasting nicely with the more restrained square images. A number of themes started to emerge: most conspicuously the human element vs the inhuman coldness of nature. I prefaced the book with a quote from philosopher Jacques Derrida. In his "Foi et Savoir" (Belief and Knowledge; which I had with me on the trek) he writes about three unchartable places: the island, the desert and the Promised Land. This topographical element too is a red thread through the portfolio.
It still needs work, though. There is a middle section which plays too much on "isolated figure in landscape" and towards the end the succession of landscapes lets the attention flag. Also, a postface needs to be written and lots of the finer points of the design need to be attended to. But it is not bad for a pure beginner's work.
I've had the design printed on the lambda to see what a hardcopy would tell me. I've also sent the electronic version to a number of people. The general feedback is very positive. And I got some useful suggestions for improvement. To be continued.
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